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March 16, 2009

New Story: Give Me One Reason

Filed under: New Stories — agentrez @ 10:26 pm

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New 24 Fanfic: “Give Me One Reason”

When Tony promised Jack that he would turn himself in after the crisis was over, he had every intention of keeping his word. But now that he’s actually faced with the prospect of going back to prison, will he have the courage to make good on his promise, or will he look for a way out? That’s the premise of my new story, which place at the end of Day 7, after Jack & co. have saved the world. The final threat and how they handle it and what happens afterwards are pure speculation and not based on any spoilers, though I have a way of predicting things in my fanfics (case in point: my DC-based fanfic that I wrote 4 years ago that had Tony accused of involvement in a plot to hijack the air traffic controls). In spite of my penchant for predicting the events of the show, I don’t know anything about the season finale, and this should be safe for anyone who has seen 7×13 to read.

I know I’ve had a lot of new stories lately, and some of you are probably tired of me starting new stories instead of updating “Pretty Bad Things”. An update for that is coming soon, but I had this idea and I couldn’t resist. This is the first of probably two parts, and it’s pretty short, but hopefully the second part will be up either today or tomorrow.

March 2, 2009

Yet Another New Fanfic: “What the Hell Happened to You?”

Filed under: New Stories — agentrez @ 7:11 pm

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Yet another one-shot inspired by the final exchange between Jack and Tony in 7×10 on the steps near the Capitol. This one is different from “I Need Your Help”, even though they were inspired by the same scene. This story, tentatively titled “What the Hell Happened to You?” addresses Jack’s thoughts during his little moment of contemplation, before Tony came along and ruined his rare moment of peace. It’s a little bit of a Jack/Audrey story, but mostly just an attempt to address Jack’s state of mind in Day 7: his emotions or lack their of, the combination of resentment and sympathy he has shown towards Tony, and whether he is still able to feel anything anymore. This story also includes a flashback that shows how Jack convinced President Palmer to pardon Tony and how that plays into Jack’s current emotions.

Without further ado, here’s my new story: “What the Hell Happened to You?”

Enjoy and please review. Feedback is very much appreciated, positive or constructive.