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I know it’s been a little while. Like a lot of fans, I’ve been pretty demoralized by the Tony twist, and for a while it sapped my motivation to keep writing fanfic. I even went on to writing an original screenplay, which is in its very early stages but I will post more about later. But in the meantime, the last episode inspired me to write a new 24 fanfic, based on the confrontation scene between Jack and Tony in 7×22. The first part shows Jack’s inner thoughts during that pivotal scene, and then the second part shows Tony’s. 

This fiction also inspired me to write an original song, and the lyrics are posted as part of Tony’s POV. I am working on trying to record the song so people can hear it, but I suck at singing so I am too self-conscious to put it up right now. But if anyone is interested in singing my song please let me know and I can send you what I envisioned for the tune.

Enjoy the new story and the song and please review. If you have not seen 7×22 yet you might want to stay away.

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Here’s another clip as part of my new “Real Almeida Project”, designed to highlight some of the sweetest Tony moments and the moments that make you most proud of him in seasons 1-5. This clip is from season 4, when Tony takes time out of his busy evening to update Audrey on what’s going on with Jack, who is currently being held by Marwan as CTU decides whether or not to go through with the exchange. I know not everyone likes Audrey, but either way, I like this clip because Tony is such a sweetheart, and he says “Jack is just about the only friend I have left, so I’m going to do everything I can to keep him safe”. After last night’s ending scene I thought it would be comforting to watch this scene…this is the real Tony Almeida, not the imposter we saw last night!

4×15: Tony Updates Audrey on Jack\’s Status

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New 24 Fanfic: “Give Me One Reason”

When Tony promised Jack that he would turn himself in after the crisis was over, he had every intention of keeping his word. But now that he’s actually faced with the prospect of going back to prison, will he have the courage to make good on his promise, or will he look for a way out? That’s the premise of my new story, which place at the end of Day 7, after Jack & co. have saved the world. The final threat and how they handle it and what happens afterwards are pure speculation and not based on any spoilers, though I have a way of predicting things in my fanfics (case in point: my DC-based fanfic that I wrote 4 years ago that had Tony accused of involvement in a plot to hijack the air traffic controls). In spite of my penchant for predicting the events of the show, I don’t know anything about the season finale, and this should be safe for anyone who has seen 7×13 to read.

I know I’ve had a lot of new stories lately, and some of you are probably tired of me starting new stories instead of updating “Pretty Bad Things”. An update for that is coming soon, but I had this idea and I couldn’t resist. This is the first of probably two parts, and it’s pretty short, but hopefully the second part will be up either today or tomorrow.

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Yet another one-shot inspired by the final exchange between Jack and Tony in 7×10 on the steps near the Capitol. This one is different from “I Need Your Help”, even though they were inspired by the same scene. This story, tentatively titled “What the Hell Happened to You?” addresses Jack’s thoughts during his little moment of contemplation, before Tony came along and ruined his rare moment of peace. It’s a little bit of a Jack/Audrey story, but mostly just an attempt to address Jack’s state of mind in Day 7: his emotions or lack their of, the combination of resentment and sympathy he has shown towards Tony, and whether he is still able to feel anything anymore. This story also includes a flashback that shows how Jack convinced President Palmer to pardon Tony and how that plays into Jack’s current emotions.

Without further ado, here’s my new story: “What the Hell Happened to You?”

Enjoy and please review. Feedback is very much appreciated, positive or constructive.

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I’m still working on “Pretty Bad Things”, but Monday’s episode inspired me to do a semi-related story called “I Need Your Help”. As you might have guessed from the title, this story is an extended version of the penultimate scene in 7×10 by the Washington Monument (hopefully that doesn’t give too much away for those who have not seen the episode). Jack is tired of sacrificing for a government that shuns him, but an old friend and his sense of duty may compel him into action yet again.

View my new story here: http://24fanfiction.com/stories/help/
Reviews are always appreciated!

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Yet another installment of “Pretty Bad Things”, my fanfiction that attempts to tell the back story of Tony’s life between seasons 5 and 7. It’s also a bit of a Jack/Audrey story, in a weird way, and the new chapter has a fun flashback for my fellow Jack/Audrey shippers.

Reviews are always appreciated!

“Pretty Bad Things” Chapter 7

For those of you who are new to the story, the other chapters can be found here.

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For those of you who are reading “Pretty Bad Things”, my new fanfiction that attempts to tell the back story of what Tony has been up to since we thought he died in season 5, I am pleased to report that I have another update. Reviews are always appreciated, good and bad. I hope to have chapter 7 up pretty soon as well.

For those of you who have not read the story yet, the other chapters are here.

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I realized I never posted an update about chapter 4 when I posted it, so for those of you who missed it, you get two new chapters. Plus, I completely rewrote chapter 1, so that the whole story now takes place at the end of Day 7, after Jack, Tony and crew have saved the world. Now Tony has to face the consequences of what he did and the difficulty of telling Jack what those “pretty bad things” were.

Here’s the brand new chapter, “Some Pretty Bad Things” Chapter 5.

Enjoy. Feedback is very much appreciated!

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Just finished chapter 3 of “Pretty Bad Things”, my fanfiction attempting to explain what Tony’s been up to since everyone thought he was dead. Once again, I recommend seeing the first 6 episodes (or at least the first 4) of season 7 before reading it. Reviews are always appreciated, good or bad.

Read chapter 3 here, or start at the beginning here.

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Once again, spoiler warning for overseas viewers. Only read this if you have seen at least the first 4 episodes of season 7.

Pretty Bad Things Chapter 2

Feedback is very much appreciated. I hope to have another update soon.