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Sorry it’s been so long…I posted Part 4 of “Demons in My Head, Demons in My Bed“. It’s from Jack’s POV and it’s kind of steamy…tasteful but detailed…so if you are uncomfortable with that stay away. I’m a little nervous about it because I am not totally comfortable writing these kinds of scenes, so I’d really appreciate any feedback.

The last three chapters of “Demons” take place post season 5, except that in this version Jack never got that phone call at the end (hope it’s ok to say that…I chose my words carefully because that could mean a zillion things and shouldn’t really spoil anything for UK/Irish viewers).

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Just posted Part 3 of Demons in My Head, Demons in My Bed. This part’s from Jack’s POV, and it’s mostly a Jack/Audrey story but it also deals with his feelings about some of his other ladies, Tony’s death, the guilt he suffered about his relationship with Nina, and other demons inside his head.

I am posting this at about 7:35 Eastern Standard Time, so whatever happens on the season finale is completely irrelevant. If Audrey is killed, turns out to be a mole (which would be absolutely ridiculous at this point), or if Jack has to disappear or anything else comes between them it is irrelevant to this story and all of my other stories so far. I believe Jack and Audrey should be together at the end of the season and I am going to keep writing based on the ending I want regardless of what actually happens.