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March 2, 2009

Yet Another New Fanfic: “What the Hell Happened to You?”

Filed under: New Stories — agentrez @ 7:11 pm

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Yet another one-shot inspired by the final exchange between Jack and Tony in 7×10 on the steps near the Capitol. This one is different from “I Need Your Help”, even though they were inspired by the same scene. This story, tentatively titled “What the Hell Happened to You?” addresses Jack’s thoughts during his little moment of contemplation, before Tony came along and ruined his rare moment of peace. It’s a little bit of a Jack/Audrey story, but mostly just an attempt to address Jack’s state of mind in Day 7: his emotions or lack their of, the combination of resentment and sympathy he has shown towards Tony, and whether he is still able to feel anything anymore. This story also includes a flashback that shows how Jack convinced President Palmer to pardon Tony and how that plays into Jack’s current emotions.

Without further ado, here’s my new story: “What the Hell Happened to You?”

Enjoy and please review. Feedback is very much appreciated, positive or constructive.

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